Saturday, March 22, 2014

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In the mundane darkness of the morn,
The world awakened in its scorn,
Writes the weary pen on pages torn,
Tales of castles and mysteries forlorn.
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Narayan Hore
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Chinedu Dike 24 January 2020

Well articulated and nicely embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm. A beautiful work of art. Thanks for sharing, Narayan.

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Shouvik Narayan Hore 25 January 2020

Thank you Chinedu.

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Mahi Priyanka Raj 08 September 2018

it's really a Nice verse shouvik

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Shouvik Narayan Hore 25 January 2020

Thank you Mahi.

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Shouvik Narayan Hore 25 January 2020

Much Thanks Mahi.

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Dr Antony Theodore 31 May 2016

n the mundane darkness of the morn, The world awakened in its scorn, Writes the weary pen on pages torn, Tales of castles and mysteries forlorn. very fine rhyming with full sense of the words in its coinage into philosophical views....... thank you very much dear poet

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Many thanks.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 March 2014

nice lines... good poem Inside poet smiles at proposal Finds no support and meets with dismissal “People may use you for selfish end” In this world you may never find ally or friend

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Thank You.

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Gajanan Mishra 22 March 2014

darkness of the morn, good one, thanks. go on. Please read my poems and comment .

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Thanks.

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Narayan Hore

Narayan Hore

Burdwan, West Bengal
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