Tuesday, July 31, 2018

The Poet's Wife Comments

Rating: 5.0

The Poet's Wife
Wife grumbles all day through:
"Just look, writes poems, idiot!
His brain's got really crooked.
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valentin savin
COMMENTS
Bri Edwards 26 November 2024

'To be plucked, sniffed, and thrown'.: ? ? ? That must be a phrase 'Val' borrowed from Mr. Putin! ! ! I'd NEVER say such a thing! [ almost never ]

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Bri Edwards 26 November 2024

Autumn/bottom (aka '') must have been a rhyme with which I helped my good PH Russian friend! ! ! ;)

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 04 September 2023

You create a poetic mood on any theme. Amazing.

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Jagdish Singh Ramána 04 March 2019

a lovely and beautiful poem, sir! " As soon as the wife's mood changes The poet becomes an Angel." - beautiful and humorous lines. i enjoyed it very much.

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valentin savin 04 March 2019

Thank you very much, Jagdish, for your nice comment. I'm just happy.

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Poetry Lover 27 January 2019

Great sense of humour. Enjoyed reading.

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Valentin Savin 27 January 2019

Thank you very much.

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Bri Edwards 23 January 2019

Ahha! yes, i recall 'helping' you on this one. it should be sung to a hard-driving tune, and broadcast the world over. of course i'll accept some of your royalties! ! to MyPoemList. bri edwardS! hee-hee :) 'hang in there' fellow husband.

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Valentin Savin 02 January 2019

Wives are strange creatures. When everything in the house is good, they do not like something. We have to endure. God endures us and tells us to endure.

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Valentin Savin 02 January 2019

Dear Poet Poet, thank you very much for the comment.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 01 January 2019

so many have wives like urs mine doesn't read me at all i am a BORE

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Dr Antony Theodore 21 December 2018

As soon as the wife's mood changes The Poet becomes an Angel. Toils all Summer and Autumn And can't lift up his bottom........ to be plucked, sniffed....... very nice poem. i smiled as i read this poem. thank u. tony

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Valentin Savin 22 December 2018

Thank you very much, dear Dr.Tony Brahmin, for your comment. It's a pleasure to me.

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Anil Kumar Panda 13 October 2018

Very true. That is what a poet has to go through at home. Somewhat connected. Thanks for sharing.Nice poem.

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Valentin Savin 13 October 2018

Thank you, dear Anil. It's nice to have your comment.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 31 July 2018

Such a great humorous write, Valentin..10+++

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Valentin Savin 31 July 2018

Thank you, dear Bernard' for the highest evaluation of my poem.

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The plight of most of the poets portrayed nicely.Enjoyed reading the poem.

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Valentin Savin 31 July 2018

Thank you, Aham, it is just a humor but next to reality.

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