Thursday, September 11, 2014

The Poet In Me Comments

Rating: 4.7

Oh how I miss you, dear poet in me!
When I think about the time we shared,
How you had kept my stick busy in the past
And how you have divorced me suddenly
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Abekah Emmanuel
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Geetha Jayakumar 05 February 2015

Quite Interesting write dear Poet. Poet in you can never desert you, keep climbing the hill and leave the footprint behind. Beautiful presentation. Loved its flow.

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Heather Wilkins 03 November 2014

oh poet in me I need you now and together we shall leave our footprint very nice

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Soulful Heart 24 September 2014

well u seem to hv voiced my words that hv haunted me since a few months now....u surely will leave footprints and still have a lot of time to do that....so cheer up....nice poem...

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Ging Taping 19 September 2014

Two thumps up! .. Best time to write is when you're in the mood to write..

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Valsa George 15 September 2014

This kind of a dry spell of which you bemoan here recurs in the life of every poet, though I feel that the poet in you has never deserted you so far! So glad to see a gifted young man, just doing his graduation and still with such flair and grace and felicity of expression! You can still go a long way and be assured you are in no way behind! Glad being introduced to your page!

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Daniel Brick 12 September 2014

This poem deserves to be called archetypal because of its universal significance. That is, all of us poets go through distressing, frustrating dry spells when the things that have to work in harmony for creative writing are either absent or malfunctioning. But the bright irony is - this poem is very rich in all of those things, and they are working harmoniously, just as they should. I don't say this to diminish your emotional distress, but rather to highlight a bright spot in your life which is going to get brighter - and then more poems will flow from your ready hands.

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Achill Lad 11 September 2014

Another great poem, Abe. Soul searching. Meaningful. You must be patient, the best poetry is written when the heart and soul are synchronised. Quality is far better than quantity, don't compete. Be patient. For a young man you write some wonderful stuff.

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Abekah Emmanuel

Abekah Emmanuel

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