Friday, May 27, 2011

The Poet And The Sun ~ 1 Comments

Rating: 5.0

Far from us thou shining in the sky,
Thy golden rays wake up early in the morn,
And convince the birds hopeful singing fly,
Meadow is thy owed and too greenw wood,
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Mohammad Muzzammil
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Soma Mukherjee 10 November 2011

wow amazing Muzzammil, you keep surprising your fans. admire your word play, its such a blessing to be able to express one's heart so tastefully

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 08 June 2011

Nice line but sun's reply is awaited. The poet of east Iqbal wrote 'The poet and the moon'. You have done a good job sharing your thoughts with the sun. I liked it. Nice poem but still yeh dil mange more. A nice 10/10.

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