Sunday, October 18, 2015

The Poet And The Pearly Gates Comments

Rating: 5.0

I stood before the Pearly Gates.
I hung my head in shame.
St. Peter peered into his book-
But did not see my name.
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Brian Mayo
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Lily O Donnell 04 March 2018

This is so beautiful and touching. Thank You so much.

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Brian Mayo 03 December 2018

Thank you for the very nice comment.

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Neran Sati 23 October 2015

It's brilliant and I hear the message here: be what you are, devote yourself to your work to benefit others and, don't fear the future? .. even paradise: -) . So enlightening, thanks so much!

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Pamela Sinicrope 22 October 2015

Redemption through poetry. You are a talented rhyming poet. I truly enjoyed reading this too! Thanks for sharing your stories and your humor!

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Paul Brookes 21 October 2015

I loved this gentle and well told tale great work Thanks for sharing 10/10

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Melvina Germain 19 October 2015

Oh my gosh, I love this poem with all my heart, it took me high upon a mountain and I sat there and watched it all unfold. You are amazing and penned a perfect story poem...Thank you.....

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