Friday, March 21, 2008

The Poet Comments

Rating: 5.0

In first, word was. Ocean, earth, sky were mankind's discover.
But in man's mind world lived another way
This was idea. Creation's and thought's wonders aren't yet over,
Though everything is not a wonder everyday.
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Paolo Giuseppe Mazzarello
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Sicelo Sithole 10 February 2010

Beautiful. I simply love this poem..!

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ata khan 14 April 2009

This is classic. Beautifully penned. 10+

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Yelena M. 03 April 2009

Truth in every line and very captivating! Wonderful and inspiring read, thanks for sharing, poet. Best wishes. A.

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Catrina Heart 07 February 2009

Hey! my friend this is a very good classic style of penning, crafted in eloquence and soft tone and mood...Lovely read...Thanks...10

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Jim Norausky 11 January 2009

Paolo, This is a fine poem. Your work shows your schooling and intelect. Thanks for writing on this site so we can enjoy. Jim

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Stacey Watts 28 October 2008

Very brilliant piece over the life of a genius poet. Very well done.

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Until the laast line I was ready to rate the poem with 8+ Then the line 'However a poet needs a new sweetheart and God above' that convinced me to rate finally th poem with 10-. Yes, Paolo, a poet knows the legent 'vivere pericolosament' ma con amore e Dio. Thanks for sharing. Keep on with such penjoyable themes. Joseph (Juseppe) S. Josephides Member of the International Society of Poets (ISP) Int.Lib.Poetry awarded

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Patricia Gale 24 April 2008

Splendid piece..... a poets heart you do have

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Jurietta Duraan 12 April 2008

Very descriptive and enjoyable! also with insight into self, if self is a poet and I think you certainly are!

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Onelia Avelar 28 March 2008

Nice beginning and perfect end. Enjoyed reading the whole poem.

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Coreena Dejesus 27 March 2008

this is beautiful, and i have to agree with Howard, I love the way you ended this poem. Thanks topmarks! Hugs Coreena

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Howard Johnson 21 March 2008

This is a Quality write, Paolo, Leaving the reader with an uplifted feeling,

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