In first, word was. Ocean, earth, sky were mankind's discover.
But in man's mind world lived another way
This was idea. Creation's and thought's wonders aren't yet over,
Though everything is not a wonder everyday.
On pentagram poet has every note, a sweet melody,
Poet can get angry and rebel thinking it's natural:
He'll be heard and, to the power, he'll hand somebody.
Poetry world is rich in meadows, trees, hearts: it's final.
Every feeling returns towards an old love,
However poet needs a new sweetheart and God above.
Until the laast line I was ready to rate the poem with 8+ Then the line 'However a poet needs a new sweetheart and God above' that convinced me to rate finally th poem with 10-. Yes, Paolo, a poet knows the legent 'vivere pericolosament' ma con amore e Dio. Thanks for sharing. Keep on with such penjoyable themes. Joseph (Juseppe) S. Josephides Member of the International Society of Poets (ISP) Int.Lib.Poetry awarded
Very descriptive and enjoyable! also with insight into self, if self is a poet and I think you certainly are!
Nice beginning and perfect end. Enjoyed reading the whole poem.
Truth in every line and very captivating! Wonderful and inspiring read, thanks for sharing, poet. Best wishes. A.
Hey! my friend this is a very good classic style of penning, crafted in eloquence and soft tone and mood...Lovely read...Thanks...10
Paolo, This is a fine poem. Your work shows your schooling and intelect. Thanks for writing on this site so we can enjoy. Jim
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Very brilliant piece over the life of a genius poet. Very well done.