The Poet 4 Comments

heart beats... can’t feel it all the time body and soul will fade clinch to the grave but the fruit of our sincerity remain a living legacy.. that will emerge in cuckoos voice and its fragrence will remain for ever reminding the great creation made by the poet and that is all we are striving for.....namae may not remain, foot prints may vanish but not the poems....well dome poet.....10

Very nice poet well done....little woman with a beautiful heart

A very interesting thyme and inquisitive thoughts weaved with some delicate language. Good work.

a nice poem and giving the truth of life....... the demarcating line and life.......

Everyone will leave a legacy of some sort... we should work out now what one we will leave Regards Alf

A truly emotional poem... deserves my 20 +

please write more....about who..will judge.

The last verses are very insightful.

a wonderful insight... and your are right... the wisdom is a great legacy... inspirational poem...well written....10

Sincereity always pays rich dividend, but one has to wait for it. For any success, three things are required. Sincere efforts, Time, and Divine Grace. Step (1) One has to till the soil deep, sow the seed, water it and watch it Step (2) Then its own time it takes for growing as a tree. Step (3) With God's grace the tree grows well and gives its fruits. This can be applied to any work we take for achieving success at the end.

heart beats... can’t feel it all the time body and soul will fade clinch to the grave but the fruit of our sincerity remain a living legacy.. A beautiful, meaningful stanza. Great write.10.

Very good write full of practical wisdom Lady Grace...10

vow! what a great idea. that is why we should go on writing. it suits you any way. nice poem voted10 surya

great poem what we leave is important

heart beats... can’t feel it all the time body and soul will fade clinch to the grave but the fruit of our sincerity remain a living legacy.... Nice poem, Lady Grace....Keep climbing.

Much wisdom and truth in this beautifully written poem Grace. Top marks. Karin Anderson

WOW...there is plenty of truth in this poem.10+

Really enjoyed this sweet fruit of a composition......flows like juice on the tongue....full of insightful flavours....nicely done 10

Yes nice poem indeed. Sharma has sharp eyes but needs o on typo. Best, H

Nice poem Grace.........only one typ I think. IN SIGHT should be a single word, unless and until you meant something else..