The Poet 3 Poem by lady grace

The Poet 3

Rating: 4.4


man is the best creation of God
blessed with wisdom
intelligently gifted...

like a grass...he grows
to cover and protect...

like a flower...he blooms
gives life to my eyes

like a bird, , he flies
picks twig and explores...

like a moon...he shines
guiding the sailor's way home...

like a lake...he stays
nourishes living lilies

like an ocean..blue and deep
whirlpool... vortex are great
intelligence be viewed..not be kept
as poetic minds never sleep...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Raj Nandy 27 July 2009

My Lady I am in agreement with you! Even in my bed, my mind remains active and I think about the lines of my poem and try to think how to better express my self in rhyme! This happened before I wrote my, - 'Harlem Blues', I am not sure if it has been read by you? On page no.2, Thank you! 10! -Raj Nandy

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Ken E Hall 27 July 2009

Poetic minds never sleep and man is god's best creation words of a poet blessed a lady lovely work regards

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Unfortunately.................... i have to agree................God is wise

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Nikunj Sharma 26 July 2009

u are right Grace, poetic minds never sleep, and they should'nt. or else we wont be reading your wonderful poems.............kepp it up

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Ency Bearis 26 July 2009

a wonderful simile poem...a nice thought of a poet about the poets....10

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man is the best creation of God blessed with wisdom intelligently gifted... like a grass...he grows to cover and protect....... Thank God oldie has realised the fact late in the life that men are gifted with rare intellegence and wisdom..He is meant to protect the womanfalk at home.. nice written and conveyed the message....10 Goldie I wrote.. air the love.. and sincere prayers

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Mamta Agarwal 11 August 2009

lovely images, sensitive poem. you have, as Mark says captured the very essence of life.10 Mamta

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Rajaram Ramachandran 29 July 2009

This is why man is called a superior being among all the creations.

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Rafique Farooqi 29 July 2009

Life is gift of God, and man is his beautiful creation, and he is lucky to be at earth, you may read my post...i am love, ......, but you words are flowing and getting momentum everty step.......i am getting ripple of smile over my face

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Catrina Heart 28 July 2009

Even in showers the words flow with the water At breakfast letters emerge at my cup's corner. In my soup bowl chains of phrases strings at the noodles. I am a poet or just a crazy lady on the page? ? ? Lolzz! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! lovely poem........10+++++++++

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