Monday, February 10, 2020

The Poems Have Opened Wide Their Margins Comments

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The poems have opened wide their margins
Stray words falling everywhere messily, beautifully
Because I love you
And fountain pens have leaked
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Jenny Kalahar
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Bri Edwards 02 March 2020

" And takes no heed of rain falling" the " volcano" takes? I " love" these 5 lines: " And though a moody raven soars.... always and ever springtime" " Or the scrape of leaf-whipped winds" Instead, how does " Or...of wind-whipped leaves" sound to you? I guess you are deliriously in love! bri :)

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Sylvia Frances Chan 12 February 2020

I regard the spilled ink true artistic photography, also my favourite busy doing. The blue colour is shown at its best. Altogether A dashing photo, Jenny.

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Jenny Kalahar 06 March 2020

Thank you, Sylvia! - Jenny

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Sylvia Frances Chan 12 February 2020

Mesmerizing poem. Love is the precious factor but love from both sides make the love more intenser, more loved than ever, non-comparable is love from both sides. I love the topic Love, I love this poem at first sight and at final sight. A most beautiful poem for my eralky Dutch morn, so penetrating. This I regard my huge compliment for thy poem, poetess. Thank you for sharing this Beauty. God's Blessings. A 10 Full Score.

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Jenny Kalahar 13 February 2020

Thank you so much, Sylvia! Blessings also to you! - Jenny

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