Friday, December 29, 2006

The Poem That Sits In My Notebook Comments

Rating: 4.8

I wrote it yesterday,
felt it stop the press of Time
till satisfaction,
sweet like after making love,
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Max Reif
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Alison Cassidy 29 December 2006

This is glorious, whimsical, and highly imaginative, with just a whisp of irony. A poet's poem is ever there was one. '...that smiles without a mouth' is sheer bliss. love, Allie xxxxxxxxxxxxxx

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Charley60 K 29 December 2006

I really enjoyed this write....comparative it was and it flowed and imagined all what you wrote....very good.....I liked the ending..

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fanniesson - 29 December 2006

like this poem I think it captures a bit of every poets deepest fear the next one wont be as good

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Raynette Eitel 29 December 2006

Oh yes, Max...and the one just written is always the favorite...'til you write another. I love the description you had of yourself after writing the poem. Just warm and lovely. Raynette

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R H 29 December 2006

I think this will strike a chord with many. Love the image you painted of the sky. Justine

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Ulrike Gerbig 29 December 2006

yes, i like that...i know what you mean! ulrike

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