MY STORY BY A. POEM
First, let me start by saying I was never that fond of poetry.
I know, I know- -I AM a poem…
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A brilliant one Brian.. You have written a simply extraordinary poem.. Thanks.
A 10 for sure. Between the off-the-wall creative content, the effortless humor, and the talented and imaginative storytelling this poem deserves its cemented place on the web. (An infinite improvement from its former sewery residence
Wow Brian, I love creative writes such as these. An incredibly interesting perspective....10
I want to say it doesn't matter if he is an auto repair manual cause he is still going to wind up a poem. all he has to do to become a poem is go on the P......(heh heh) oh, hi Brian nice poem how about an 8?
Autobiography! LOVE THIS! Where is part two? Where r u? Can we rescue you? Are you in full form on the Internet or did pieces of you get left behind... Changed in any way? ?
Very clever write. Loved the narrative which leads thereader into the poems world. My favourite line was 'Look, I didn’t ask to be a poem. Hell, I wanted to be an auto repair manual' Impressive poem Thanks for an enjoyable read.
Fascinating. Never read anything like this. I say it in a most favorable way. Entertaining and heart warming. A fantastic narration so well accomplished you can hear and follow this poem-napkin as if you were listening and watching a film! You're a fantastic writer and director. Sincerest congratulation for this very excellent and amusing work.
Now that's a review I won't be blowing my nose on. Much thanks, Sandra.
i don't call it a poem, but, HEY! , what do i know! ? i'm but a cluster of cobwebs. i've been reincarnated for eons, first born in another galaxy, and then, in 1958, in a Ford Galaxie. I saw 'your waitress' just last night and have another 'meeting' with her tonight. i'll tell her where you can be found. bri :)