Thursday, October 22, 2015

The Poem That Almost Wasn't Comments

Rating: 4.8

MY STORY BY A. POEM

First, let me start by saying I was never that fond of poetry.
I know, I know- -I AM a poem…
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Bri Edwards 06 December 2018

i don't call it a poem, but, HEY! , what do i know! ? i'm but a cluster of cobwebs. i've been reincarnated for eons, first born in another galaxy, and then, in 1958, in a Ford Galaxie. I saw 'your waitress' just last night and have another 'meeting' with her tonight. i'll tell her where you can be found. bri :)

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Souren Mondal 06 March 2016

A brilliant one Brian.. You have written a simply extraordinary poem.. Thanks.

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Mike Smith 06 March 2016

A 10 for sure. Between the off-the-wall creative content, the effortless humor, and the talented and imaginative storytelling this poem deserves its cemented place on the web. (An infinite improvement from its former sewery residence

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Simone Inez Harriman 02 February 2016

Wow Brian, I love creative writes such as these. An incredibly interesting perspective....10

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Wes Vogler 28 November 2015

I want to say it doesn't matter if he is an auto repair manual cause he is still going to wind up a poem. all he has to do to become a poem is go on the P......(heh heh) oh, hi Brian nice poem how about an 8?

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Pamela Sinicrope 25 October 2015

Autobiography! LOVE THIS! Where is part two? Where r u? Can we rescue you? Are you in full form on the Internet or did pieces of you get left behind... Changed in any way? ?

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Paul Brookes 23 October 2015

Very clever write. Loved the narrative which leads thereader into the poems world. My favourite line was 'Look, I didn’t ask to be a poem. Hell, I wanted to be an auto repair manual' Impressive poem Thanks for an enjoyable read.

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Sandra Feldman 22 October 2015

Fascinating. Never read anything like this. I say it in a most favorable way. Entertaining and heart warming. A fantastic narration so well accomplished you can hear and follow this poem-napkin as if you were listening and watching a film! You're a fantastic writer and director. Sincerest congratulation for this very excellent and amusing work.

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Brian Mayo 23 October 2015

Now that's a review I won't be blowing my nose on. Much thanks, Sandra.

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