Thursday, February 2, 2023

The Poem Must Go On Comments

Rating: 5.0

There exists a poem,
we hear just before death
Departing in silence,
upon our last breath
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Bill Cantrell
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Susan Williams 19 February 2023

this is strong writing and all the stars in the sky would not be enough but I give it 5 because that is all that is allowed, and a fav

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Susan Williams 19 February 2023

Bill, you have the heart of both poet and soldier---this poem both grieves and uplifts, dreads and hopes---

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Bill Cantrell 19 February 2023

InSusan, only you would discern the part that uplifts, that is what makes you na great poetess, you decipher. The heartbeat of words arranged

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Bill Cantrell 21 February 2023

Thank you very much, I really appreciate your comment

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