The Poem I Lost Comments

This is a wonderful poem that builds up to a very poignant finish. Very well written. Jim

You have written this with much honesty and regret. Sometimes we find things when we are not looking for them. Before you go to sleep, shut your eyes and ask if it can come in your dreams and keep paper and pen beside you. If it doesn't come back to you, perhaps you were meant to lose it and find what you are looking for in some other way. Very beautiful work. 10 Karin Anderson

What have you written that is my own- so beautiful and toucy. I love this melodious work with 10.

Words sometimes they lose themselves, wandering off into someone elses land. Given time they will return to write even more charming poems like this. Keep writing you are a star in the making.

well done again..i am enjoying this poem... written in a sweet way, , , best of luck...10

well done..its really an impressive poem with sweet idea and done in frack way..like it...sure you got 10 out of 10... hope you like my poetry too... best of luck

Unique idea and novel expressions

Amazingly pihilosophical poem. CP

'That it will fill The lonely space inside me And take all my pain.' Wonderful poem, love it with 10.

We have all had this experience. Those words may come back to you one day. But, in any case, You must write on. And you have done so in this appealing offering. Kind regards, Sandra

The triad of life's realities has been portrayed very nicely in this poem. The blending of the contents of this triad i.e., motivation for struggle, optimism and acceptance of mistakes we make in handling is just superb. We do lose alot of things in life but a person with positive attitude always tries to recoup and find out the misplaced things and this practical approach has been elloborated in the form of words that you lost but still have a firm belief that you will find them one day. The true essence of the poem reflects a gleam of hope that has to live always no mater what happens.....10/10

good piece, Surayya...it speaks well how a poet feels...imaginative write...10

another poem born from another lost, , well done

I love this poem Surayya, I have often had this feeling myself and never quite got around to putting it in verse. I hate it when I have a poem in my heart and am nowhere I can quickly write it down. For that reason I carry a pen and paper with me most of the time and have been known to jot down a poem while driving, writing without looking down at what I am writing. Messy but at least it captures those words that if they get away, often are gone forever. Regards on such a special write. Susan

Nice touchy piece, love it.