The Poem Builder's Yard Comments

I like the image a lot, it really works! Some wonderful writing, indeed. I'm not sure if the last line is necessary...

There is ‘voluptuous’ sitting up there on the shelf (Like two tongues in one mouth) now there you go and write a line like that and I know it's going to be good. I like your style sean...you ramble, but in a most poetic way ;)

One really needs to swallow the Dictionary, so that words just come into one's head in a 'flash' ready to be used instantly. Now that would be a great advancement. Ah, well, back to that place on the shelf you mentioned! ! ! ! Happy hunting. Love Ernestine. This was a great write by the way, loved it. XXX