Tuesday, October 9, 2007

The 'Poem A Day' Project - Day 64 Comments

Rating: 3.5

I’ve taken to spending more of my time
Being somewhere else instead of on-line
Every other day I give myself a break
And I’m not sure what conclusion to take
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Emancipation Planz 11 October 2007

Checking in from Hong Kong... spending time elsewhere is fun (except when you're picking up a sick husband to take him home) ... Ciao

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Tai Chi Italy 09 October 2007

I do like this poem, a sort of sonnet form FL and I do agree that writing online is very time consuming and can take over our lives, but it is also a fantastic tool for the writer and a means of communication. We have to find balance and just because we overuse one minute does not mean we always will, things change for us as and when they need to, or so I have found. I like the way you ended your poem. Onwards and upwards, smiling at you, Tai

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