Sunday, September 30, 2007

The 'Poem A Day' Project - Day 55 Comments

Rating: 2.8

The frost on the grass looks almost like glass
The mist in the air drifts slowly
The cold on the pane reaches me again
As the ground looks chilled below me
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Flying Lemming
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Tai Chi Italy 01 October 2007

I understand what you say about critics Mr FL and I agree, negative critters are just empty critters trying to feel big. I am so pleased with your own judgement on the above poem, having read it again, I do see some appeal, but prose are prose and poetry is a mystery us poets are constantly trying to solve. I love it when it snows here too, although I live in a most gloriously quaint place all year round. Smiling at you, tai

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Flying Lemming 01 October 2007

I tend to agree, wasn't my best but i only give myself half and hour and submit it even if i am not happy with it 8)

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Tai Chi Italy 30 September 2007

With this effort, if I were you, I would quit trying for this project! lol Flying lemming indeed needs some poetry lessons...rofl Tai suggesting you ask on the forum! lol

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