Saturday, November 18, 2017

The Poem Comments

Rating: 5.0

The first light appeared in the sky
It sent shimmering rays
Over the rice field
A golden path was created
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Rose Marie Juan-austin
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Chinedu Dike 15 July 2022

A piece of great elegance

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Anjandev Roy 08 January 2022

Such a precious work......thank u....happy new year...

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Sylvia Frances Chan 12 June 2021

5 Stars Full and to my Favourites. I will come back to give my comments. Thank yiou for understanding

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Varsha M 11 February 2021

It is my language That comes from the innermost Chamber of the mind Through the core of the heart....these words are beautiful. Heart touching.

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Varsha M 11 February 2021

Such a lovely expression of the birth of poem. So well penned and presented. Lovely. Encaptivating.

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Kesav Easwaran 09 March 2020

Beautiful poem on how a poem is born. Much imaginative write. True feelings.10+

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Aniruddha Pathak 11 November 2019

One is amazed how a poem gets born. There are a variety of situations differing from poet to poet. One such is portrayed here beautifully.... And at dawn the poem is born.

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Anjandev Roy 25 August 2019

At dawn A poem is born.......magnificent piece, dear friend. anjandev roy.

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C F 20 February 2019

I like this poem, the smooth flow of words, a beautiful description of the birth of a new poem.

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Rebecca Navarre 01 October 2018

Beautifully inspirational! .. Beautifully penned! .. Beautiful Heart! .. Thank you ever so much for sharing this! .. Ever so many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++

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Bernard F. Asuncion 18 September 2018

A great stupendous poem, ate Rose..............10++++++++++++++++++++

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Kumarmani Mahakul 11 August 2018

It is ardently hope That like a river It flows And sears through Your deepest hearts........so touching and impressive for the new hope of the poet or poetess. A beautiful poem nicely shared.10

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Dr Dillip K Swain 02 August 2018

It is my language That comes from the innermost Chamber of the mind Through the core of the heart.......touching expression! A beautiful poem Rose! My pleasure reading it again!

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Mahtab Bangalee 27 June 2018

nice word on POEM- O dear look this bed is not for me this night, this darkness, this barking, this moonlit through inert lonely window, this bush of bamboo, this owl, this Gothic time, no; not these for me, You can sleep, can dream- the heaven of GOD with eye of eyes But I am not interested in these Look O dear I am and the pen; the quill with ink of heart the leaf, the blank white leaf with treasure of word live together and making love together ............... wonderful

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Robert Murray Smith 24 May 2018

A beautifully written poem reread.

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Chris Embrick 18 May 2018

Thanks for letting me share in your life's journey. Your poems are indeed a river whose tributaries reach my heart.

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Robert Murray Smith 02 May 2018

Rose Marie, a poem comes from the miracle of mind. Hopefully, it has meaning for all that read or hear it. It is uniquely the poets creation and will remain so forever.Once delivered its interpretation remains n others' minds. +++10 Robert

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Akhtar Jawad 27 April 2018

It is ardently hope That like a river It flows And sears through Your deepest hearts. Great lines, loved this poem on poem.

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Muzahidul Reza 15 April 2018

Dear poetess, you have given a great and effective idea and theme of writing / composing poem and its necessary, I mark it in my list, thanks for sharing the poem here in PoemHunter,10

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Edward Kofi Louis 11 April 2018

Like a river! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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