The first light appeared in the sky
It sent shimmering rays
Over the rice field
A golden path was created
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5 Stars Full and to my Favourites. I will come back to give my comments. Thank yiou for understanding
It is my language That comes from the innermost Chamber of the mind Through the core of the heart....these words are beautiful. Heart touching.
Such a lovely expression of the birth of poem. So well penned and presented. Lovely. Encaptivating.
Beautiful poem on how a poem is born. Much imaginative write. True feelings.10+
One is amazed how a poem gets born. There are a variety of situations differing from poet to poet. One such is portrayed here beautifully.... And at dawn the poem is born.
At dawn A poem is born.......magnificent piece, dear friend. anjandev roy.
I like this poem, the smooth flow of words, a beautiful description of the birth of a new poem.
Beautifully inspirational! .. Beautifully penned! .. Beautiful Heart! .. Thank you ever so much for sharing this! .. Ever so many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++
A great stupendous poem, ate Rose..............10++++++++++++++++++++
It is ardently hope That like a river It flows And sears through Your deepest hearts........so touching and impressive for the new hope of the poet or poetess. A beautiful poem nicely shared.10
It is my language That comes from the innermost Chamber of the mind Through the core of the heart.......touching expression! A beautiful poem Rose! My pleasure reading it again!
nice word on POEM- O dear look this bed is not for me this night, this darkness, this barking, this moonlit through inert lonely window, this bush of bamboo, this owl, this Gothic time, no; not these for me, You can sleep, can dream- the heaven of GOD with eye of eyes But I am not interested in these Look O dear I am and the pen; the quill with ink of heart the leaf, the blank white leaf with treasure of word live together and making love together ............... wonderful
Thanks for letting me share in your life's journey. Your poems are indeed a river whose tributaries reach my heart.
Rose Marie, a poem comes from the miracle of mind. Hopefully, it has meaning for all that read or hear it. It is uniquely the poets creation and will remain so forever.Once delivered its interpretation remains n others' minds. +++10 Robert
It is ardently hope That like a river It flows And sears through Your deepest hearts. Great lines, loved this poem on poem.
Dear poetess, you have given a great and effective idea and theme of writing / composing poem and its necessary, I mark it in my list, thanks for sharing the poem here in PoemHunter,10
A piece of great elegance