The Plough Of Time Comments

Beautiful poem A single star beamed downits crystal cableand drew a plough through the earth

The awesome flight of imagery is simply fantastic. A wonderful poem, a pleasure to read.

'The stars remained fixed each with its crystal cable beamed to earth each attached to the immense plough furrowing our lives' - the poem ends so beautifully!

The crystal earth turned and the bodies with it, supercilious

Outstanding poem. Poem full of imageries and fine flowing. Sky's the limit, nothing can stop reaching above it.

i'm glad to see lawrence's poem featured today. this one is new to me, and i'm not sure i get what he's saying here. i am reminded though of a favorite poem by dylan thomas, in my craft or sullen art. -gk

couples embracing... Congratulations and thank you for sharing this exquisite write, Lawrence. Cheryl♡

the evolution of time.thanks for writing.i do look upon the stars too but i wonder if they do look back at me.

drew a plough through the earth unearthing bodies clasped together/// expresses many hidden meanings///// greatly penned the plough of time

crystal cable and drew a plough through the earth unearthing bodies clasped together .. the immense plough. a very fine poem and great imagination. tony couples embracing...

A poem of an epic proportion, Lawrence...... Congrats for being selected for the second time......

Clever use of imagery. Enjoyed the flow and concept. Thanks for sharing.

A great wiring about nature.Likes

House of crystal! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Lawrence, such a great write....congrats for being picked... a huge 10+++

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