The Plight Of A Lover Boy Comments

you made me smile, at your sight hairs up despite having a brush; I swear sometimes I'd even blush; when you mentioned my names I'd be shy; I had heard them before several times but from you was always my favorite; united like manchester football club...... i had a mighty laugh when i read it.... Achilles heel...... powerful and funny examples you have used.. that adds to merit of this poem and your poetic skill dear Kondwani. thank u dear. tony