It was only just a week ago, I heard she passed away
My heart was sad and I made a pledge to visit her today
We met so many years ago when youth was in its prime
And her blue eyes always sparkled when she looked into mine.
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it really makes me cry..because it's perfect and had no word to say... well done just well done..
Absolutely beautiful - an epic write, which I enjoyed reading very much. So very well written and rhymed. A great piece of work, well done.
So hauntingly beautiful a story that is mesmerizing, powerful and spiritual! Brilliant write!