Monday, July 30, 2012

The Pledge Comments

Rating: 5.0

It was only just a week ago, I heard she passed away
My heart was sad and I made a pledge to visit her today
We met so many years ago when youth was in its prime
And her blue eyes always sparkled when she looked into mine.
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Shaun Foster
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Hazel Durham 06 April 2013

So hauntingly beautiful a story that is mesmerizing, powerful and spiritual! Brilliant write!

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 01 August 2012

it really makes me cry..because it's perfect and had no word to say... well done just well done..

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Valerie Dohren 30 July 2012

Absolutely beautiful - an epic write, which I enjoyed reading very much. So very well written and rhymed. A great piece of work, well done.

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