Tuesday, December 17, 2013

The Pledge Comments

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An old tree with dusk leaves on the edge of
Ageing horizon beneath gloomy sky
Eyeing flock of swallows in a pattern of
Arrow shooting straight into the hill high
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Ibnu Din Assingkiri
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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 21 December 2013

Wow frangipani eh. What an idyllic poem so winsome n pleasant to read.

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Yasmin Khan 21 December 2013

You've set a beautiful scene to describe the cherished moments of writing a pledge. It's touching verse.

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Ibnu Din Assingkiri

Ibnu Din Assingkiri

Singkir Laut, Kedah, Malaysia
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