The Pledge Comments

The pledge you made yesterday under the sunlight of March binds you closely to Poetry. But before proceeding further look into the auditorium: your audience droop and wilt like flowers that drank too much sun. They must be awakened, galvanized, alert to every message, both blatant and subtle- - - - - - - I am coming back to this poem to read it again and again.A great piece of art.

hey, daniel! i like the flight in this poem. i'm reminded of images from marc chagall. yes, in spite of it all, let us joy in the art and goodness we can share, let us rise in tacit defiance of the bad news and forces that would make us sink. -glen

Hi Daniel- Ah, tis good to read a poem by you- it has been a while for me- - -> I will drop the necessary words into mix like so many coins tossed into a baroque fountain of cool nocturnal waters. < - - - - - - - - - - Now that is what I call writing literature! ! ! I am putting this into my fav list so I will read it again and again envy that songbird of a pen you have there! ! 10