The Pleasure Of Disillusionment Comments

romance with disillusionment...another type of illusion! a poem that reflects vaibhav's good insight into his thinkings...a poem with a practical message...

Vaibhav, this is also a nice poem. i am a kind of person who loves to live in the dream world and escape into my fantacy land when life's bitterness comes to bite and take away a part of my happiness. i really liked your ending lines, they are very sweet. i don't see any harm in spending each day of your life away from the harsh reality and bring back some hope to cling on to for some time. take care,

term of pleasure............when u can appreciate what is pain..........that's the biggest pleasure.

So your flight has landed on the grounds of reality, a romantic dream, an ideal companion, mysterious journey, so you enjoyed being in illusion…but it is good to come back to face reality, Frost says in 'Birches'… it is good to climb the branches and experience heaven…but ‘Earth is the right place to love”, sooner or later this Disillusionment has to be faced. Your poem is systematically composed; it ascends in a pace and then descends back to reality…, impressive ending. Real to Ideal is more realistic than being Ideal to real…. **Abha**

:) ..'Thanks to Disillusionment'..... the best line here.... liked it very much..