Wednesday, August 19, 2009

The Players (Cameo) Comments

Rating: 4.7

players
on the board online
queen to queen, in rook..open king
focusing
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lady grace
COMMENTS
Merna Ibrahim 26 August 2009

Nice poem indeed...as usual! !

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Eyan Desir 25 August 2009

Good write I hope Ian likes it... and the coach.............haha.....

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Shashendra Amalshan 24 August 2009

very creative! ! ! ! ! Hey what is this about.. online chess! ! ! ! yeah now since you are the queen, no one can check mate you! ! ! May be some other queen checkmate the king you like! ! ! lolss anyway I really liked the idea behind this one.... 10++ lovess Shan//

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 22 August 2009

for what it stands as cymbolic, i could not fathom. can you enlighten me? shan

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Nikunj Sharma 22 August 2009

indeed a weet, meaningful write..........10 from me...I love chess, its an amazing game of patience, hiding your motives, making moves to distract the opposition, etc...good poem

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Ken E Hall 22 August 2009

Bonding game you place the words in the right place must tell you last week played chess first time in my life grandson was teaching me, when we started and 3 more times after the first he screamed out at me 'I keep telling you that you can't move that way! ' and he is only 5! regards

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 21 August 2009

very good. You know, someday i must learn chess!

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Ency Bearis 21 August 2009

there might be a Grandmaster on the play...an easy checkmate...

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Sebastine Humaemo 21 August 2009

waa bleeeeeeeee...lol learnt chess...waaa...haha keoonnnnnn....lets play thn..but dont dare to win me...haha

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Rajaram Ramachandran 21 August 2009

Every game has its own tempo, provided one takes keen interest in it.

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Noel Horlanda 21 August 2009

The same here as the other one - start game. So this cameo style, I think this style is easier to write compared to a haiku. Could you compose a longer version so that your reader would enjoy more, please...?

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Catrina Heart 21 August 2009

I tried playing chess though I didnt have the patience in learning it, maybe i love more of outdoor sports that's why....lovely still! ! ! To Ian well with Grace's poem i might rethink of learning chess once more...only you should have a very long patience if you are going to teach me.....: 0)

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Miriam Maia Padua 20 August 2009

Chess game... a friendship bond... checkmate in friendship.. Play with me too, my friend... 10++ for this nice piece... Lovelots, Maia

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C. P. Sharma 20 August 2009

A strange checkmate game. CP

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