Tuesday, March 10, 2015

The Players Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sweet, charming, lovely players,
Not cheaters like humans,
They don't need an empire,
They play fare games,
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Hazel Durham 14 March 2015

Competition is in everything in life it can bring out the best or the worst in people! Superb write!

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Bisma Mirza 11 March 2015

wow......... amazing ONE! ! ! ! 10 ON 10....

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Valsa George 10 March 2015

Another great write Akhtarji! The animals are fair players and unlike humans, among them' the distances tend to Absolute Zero! We have to learn much from them!

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Khalida Bano Ali 10 March 2015

a great poem............................10

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