Tuesday, April 8, 2008

The Player (A Hair Product Is Not A Love Product) Comments

Rating: 5.0

Put all of your excuses in the basement,
coz I've got somethin' better for you,
it's a word called 'atonement',
for the ladies' hearts you broke into two.
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Lou Embalsado
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angelianne 1012 18 June 2008

nicely written piece..i liked it.thanks for sharing..this truly deserves a *10*

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Ivor Hogg 09 April 2008

Interesting write containing a great deal of truth presnted in poetic prose

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 09 April 2008

i'm speechless after reading your piece...........something amazed me. the best player should be given a 10.

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