Friday, December 28, 2018

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I have lived 100 pages and more 100 to live
Half way through, yet easy to conceive
Small is my part in the worlds play
That page by page continues to decay
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Bobby yadav
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Me Poet Yeps Poet 12 February 2019

So, don't worry if you didn't get the fame Follow me deeply and our life has just been the same Read; walk through the last pages of our glory I shall meet you then and that would be the end of the story BEAUTIFUL BOBBY THAT'S ALL WHAT LIFE IS ABOUT ENJOY and be happy Each one has been dold a set of cards and a hand is they say never dealt twice that should suffice read my Mom's Smiles THANKS BOBBY LOVELY NAME URS

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Bharati Nayak 02 January 2019

And I still have 100 pages to live I may have 100 pages to live 100 pages turned more 100 to believe An honest world around me in the next chapter Where I may achieve great or just turn into a bad actor A fine poem about life- - All our dreams may not come true, but some dreams are realised.Those fulfilled dreams will create hope for more dreams.Thanks for sharing this wonderful poem.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 12 February 2019

very beautiful and lovely comment to lovely Bobby

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Dr Antony Theodore 28 December 2018

walk through the last pages of our glory I shall meet you then and that would be the end of the story. a very fine poem..thinking of life, pages written, untold, glory, life, thinking about achievements...... thank u. tony

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