They had agreed, in fact it was a pledge.
To honour all commandments, also those
they still were unaware of. Near the edge
was, on her left, (he rested in a pose)
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i don't get it, but it is beautiful. I'll try reading it again when i'm better rested. Kudos.
I enjoy the discreetness of this poem.. so evocative that way.
Herbert, aka Haines, Jr.! So lovely to see you here again! Thanks for sharing your always intelligent poetry.