Friday, November 30, 2007

The Plato Pledge Comments

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They had agreed, in fact it was a pledge.
To honour all commandments, also those
they still were unaware of. Near the edge
was, on her left, (he rested in a pose)
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Herbert, aka Haines, Jr.! So lovely to see you here again! Thanks for sharing your always intelligent poetry.

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Chris Mendros 30 November 2007

i don't get it, but it is beautiful. I'll try reading it again when i'm better rested. Kudos.

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Michael Shepherd 30 November 2007

I enjoy the discreetness of this poem.. so evocative that way.

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