Thursday, November 29, 2012
The Planets Comments
Rating: ★5.0
I'm waiting for the Sun to shine,
But it won't wait for me,
I'm either still asleep in bed,
Or busy having tea.
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Hans Vr
01 December 2012
I like the allmost cyncal way you argue about the sun and the moon and the starrs. Very original thoughts expressed in wonderfully sounding verses I got so many smiles, reading this poem. This is imagination at its best. Excellent
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7/24/2025 7:52:56 PM # 1.0.0
Fantastic, really clever write and very amusing.