Saturday, December 19, 2009

The Place Within Me Comments

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There's a place within me
That's mean and horride
I don't want that place within me
Once that place within me is out
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Tricia Lemaster
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It's really good that you found that place. I loved the way you described it. It makes a lot of sense.

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Whisperkwane Lamb 11 February 2010

young people need to know what feels good and not feel good...you've found that you've said...very good...love is a feeling...you can't really add a definition to it...but the joy of it is known...felt around the world...stay in a warm place..smile...feel good...good write

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 19 December 2009

of course, we have inside us a very comfortable place... it seems that your poems here are labeled 'new'... are you new here in poemhunter? if yes, well, may your stay here be poetically good and comfortable...

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