The Pit Comments
The pit is ever growing
Sucking me into its contagious
Desire of needing, wanting, yearning
To have it all within arms reach
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Wow! You really like this person. Reminds me of one of my friends, lol.
By wanting it all, material things or your obsession; -) Good poem Keep up the great work
a very beautiful write specialy this line ' Desire of needing, wanting, yearning' beautiful very beautiful....keep on writing
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7/23/2025 10:44:09 PM # 1.0.0
this one is great too