In Victoria on Vancouver Island
‘The Pirate’ is at his work;
Most industrious and indiscreet-
Dismissive of the motley flow,
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With your strong power of imaginative reconstruction of life, enjoying the poem as a movie on the celluloid. Beautiful. A simple request, if you don't take it otherwise, you should write verse-drama in this phase. Actually you need the space. A broadscape writing expecting to you. Your craft of using time with its expanded zone, your skill of creating imagery, your philosophical outlook and easy way of expression.......all these are the components playing behind my request. Please consider me if I go beyond my border of approach. Thank you............10/10 Regards, pranab
Ah, what a wonderful poem! You have such a wonderful way of expressing great images. I saw the entire scenario as if I'd been there with you. Just lovely.10++++
I really enjoyed this poem, it made me think about the difference small coins mean to different people therefore thinking about how we can help others in small ways, doesn't have to be big gestures. Great Poem Matt xx