Friday, August 24, 2018

The Pious Guide ♥ Comments

Rating: 5.0

Time stood still as we talked along the trodden path,
The fringes of the day lingered on clock's pendulum
which stood like bamboo trees tall and thick.
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M. Asim Nehal
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Me Poet Yeps Poet 27 August 2018

u r an excellent poet thats why u too r soaring

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 27 August 2018

you too are a great poet sir that's why u r soaring

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 27 August 2018

very beautiful poetry no wonder u too are soaring

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Kumarmani Mahakul 26 August 2018

This deeply philosophical poem is very motivational in nature.Between the sunset and uncertain dawn the past glory guides mind. Standing separately still you can feel this. Stones are definitely eager to talk. We have to try to understand the language understanding language. An amazing poem is excellently penned...10

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 24 August 2018

A beautiful poem of love. Vividly portrayed. Great imagery.10

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