Saturday, October 18, 2008

The Pinnacle Of Creativity Comments

Rating: 5.0

Eat my little dream
Like a forbidden fruit
And tell me
How it tastes like?
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Dr Kamran Haider Bukhari
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Emancipation Planz 16 November 2008

I nibbled, then I got the taste to savour, so went back and reread and ate delicious some more...

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Pallvi Sharma 28 October 2008

completly different.....i have never come across such depth with so simple words....gud work

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Anjali Sinha 27 October 2008

wow wow wo! ! ! ! well here in simple words i say YOU HAVE MADE MY DAY got it! ! ! ! 'Fancy lyrical metaphors Decorated with artificiality And irony' Yeah me too sometimes have this habit of fancy --- Whatever u expressed all this in true simple language -straight to the heart -better if you were a Cardio. 10++regards anju

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Onelia Avelar 20 October 2008

:) You make me wonder what is it to eat someone's dream :) How it tastes like :) Is there a word for that kind of taste? Maybe that is why you give suggestions (sour, sweet, bitter) and you /the personage/ seem to be prepared to hear any response, if only it is true. Very well! br, one

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Sarwar Chowdhury 19 October 2008

Truely poetic expression kamran! Atomic energy inside! move forward. the pinnacle is waiting for you. yea10+++++

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Sathyanarayana M V S 19 October 2008

This is a dynamite........very good....powerful expresssion.........10

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 18 October 2008

Don't be a poet, for the sake of to be a poet, but........for the twists and turns of words like ' i don't love you anymore, but will keep you in my heart'.Common..eat that please! .Great writes as usual my bro Kamran.keep it up!

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Philippa Lane 18 October 2008

I think Sandra Fowler made a wise comment. I don't think I can say more about this poem, as she has said what I would say. But I'm not entirely sure I understand the poem. Excellent writing. Thank you.

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Sandra Fowler 18 October 2008

Fascinating words of self-revelation. Few will ever reach the pinnacle of creativity. This is just as well. It must, I think be a lonesome state of mind. Excellent write. Kind regards, Sandra

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