Eat my little dream
Like a forbidden fruit
And tell me
How it tastes like?
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completly different.....i have never come across such depth with so simple words....gud work
wow wow wo! ! ! ! well here in simple words i say YOU HAVE MADE MY DAY got it! ! ! ! 'Fancy lyrical metaphors Decorated with artificiality And irony' Yeah me too sometimes have this habit of fancy --- Whatever u expressed all this in true simple language -straight to the heart -better if you were a Cardio. 10++regards anju
:) You make me wonder what is it to eat someone's dream :) How it tastes like :) Is there a word for that kind of taste? Maybe that is why you give suggestions (sour, sweet, bitter) and you /the personage/ seem to be prepared to hear any response, if only it is true. Very well! br, one
Truely poetic expression kamran! Atomic energy inside! move forward. the pinnacle is waiting for you. yea10+++++
This is a dynamite........very good....powerful expresssion.........10
Don't be a poet, for the sake of to be a poet, but........for the twists and turns of words like ' i don't love you anymore, but will keep you in my heart'.Common..eat that please! .Great writes as usual my bro Kamran.keep it up!
I think Sandra Fowler made a wise comment. I don't think I can say more about this poem, as she has said what I would say. But I'm not entirely sure I understand the poem. Excellent writing. Thank you.
Fascinating words of self-revelation. Few will ever reach the pinnacle of creativity. This is just as well. It must, I think be a lonesome state of mind. Excellent write. Kind regards, Sandra
I nibbled, then I got the taste to savour, so went back and reread and ate delicious some more...