Saturday, April 16, 2022

The Pink Slip Comments

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Years grow on
The palm trees
Like crescent moon
Under their weight, I swoon.
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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon
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I had posted rejoinders to the notes of Rose Marie. But they have disappeared. Who has purloined them?

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 17 April 2022

A beautiful poem full of metaphor and images.Brilliantly crafted.

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Happy to read your comments. Reagards…

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 17 April 2022

How we paint our life is a matter of choice. We can make it bright or dark. Everything we do in life it will come back to us.

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Very true, Rose Marie. There is no escape from one's Karma…

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Dr. M. Asim Nehal 17 April 2022

Life is what how you treat it. A thought provoking poem. Full****

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Nice to read your comments, Dr Nehal. Thank You

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David Wood 16 April 2022

We should all lead an honourable life, but we all make mistakes, cést la vie.

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As is our right to live an Honourable Life, I believe, so is our right to live our life without the fear of sinning and ‘consequent damnation'. Thank You David.

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Whether we accept or not, and whether God has cursed us that the wages of sin are death, our conscience ensures that we are haunted for life if our acts have caused pain to others or if we have failed to act when warranted. cést la vie.

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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

PUTHENCHIRA, KERALA, INDIA
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