Saturday, May 12, 2012

The Pinecone Oak Comments

Rating: 5.0

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Pardon me, young man. I can see you're busy.
Please, sit by me on the porch awhile.
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R. G. Bell
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Kelly Kurt 10 April 2015

I enjoyed this poem, R. G. I will come back to read it again

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R.j. Wynn 01 May 2013

The government would pay to study that.

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Luscious Larry 28 December 2012

You nailed it. Perfect. Missed you.

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Romeo Della Valle 08 September 2012

Admirable! A deep, well elaborated and thought provoking write! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! God Bless You! New York City

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Smoky Hoss 20 May 2012

- As my old hippie friend would say: Far-Out! ; What I really like about this (as with so many of R. G.'s works) is the keen observatory powers found here. You have so acutely drawn the real-life picture of todays generation-gap. We (older-souls) tend to see what is about us (at least those of us who still look!) , most younger folks (but certainly not all) seem to be absorbed in a rather artificial view of being, generally prefering to see life moving on a small video screen instead of the usual (boring) way of being present in it, and of it. I think you have perfectly captured a piece of that reality right here, with these wonderful words. I like it alot! ! !

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Valerie Dohren 13 May 2012

Very good, no-one has time any more for nature, they're too busy with their gizmos.

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Dave Walker 13 May 2012

An amazing talk you had on that porch. A great poem.

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