Friday, February 15, 2013

The Pilgrim's Song Comments

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I call my love from the conclaves of the bird.
Hear me maid! Hear me maiden! !
Hear me calling, calling out to you.
The voice in the wind, in the silence, in the wilderness;
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Kevin Patrick 14 April 2013

This had an epic scope, but it never felt long or overbearing, this was filled with true unbridled passion, I especially love the secound to last stanza where you state that you are simply a man in love, and that itself is magic enough. You call your love through every land, and it shows here. A lovely sunday read

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Chime Justice Ndubuisi 15 February 2013

Enchanting! What a power love wields over everything. Nice read.

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