Tuesday, April 8, 2014

The Pile Of Stones Comments

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You collected and made a pile of stones
And excitedly invited me outside
To view this gravelly incarnation
Which you looked upon with pride
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Paul Reed
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Denis Mair 28 August 2016

Very nice rhymes. GRAVELLY INCARNATION...THE CARES OF CARVING A WAY FORWARD...INGRAINED WOES OF THE DAY These phrases are fresh and wonderfully expressive.

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