The Pieces Of My Heart Comments

Hi Theo, (the pieces of my heart) a wonderful poem. You have a piece of my heart Theo, simple, feeling, how we are very similar in our thoughts as you write with honesty. Great stuff.

favorite line her smile is pure and simple, like sunshine through a raindrop. overall good, simple and pure.

Fantastic blood rush in words ++++10 regards

love breaks you again and again, and so releases your heart!

good poem. enjoyed reading it.

This is stunning... An absolutely beautiful poem and delightful to read.

Wonderful, this is mouth-watering, brilliant, big up,