Friday, July 26, 2013

The Picture On The Wall Comments

Rating: 5.0

She wakes to a pool of light reflecting their bedroom,
Which now seems lonely and out of sight,
She turns over to his side of the bed,
Where his imprint is still warm and his lingering manly smell,
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Hazel Durham
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Akhtar Jawad 25 October 2017

Bitter truths of a painful conjugal life impressively painted in a touching poem.

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Ken E Hall 01 May 2015

Lovely poem indeed a pleasure to read of this sad clever write...life is full of sadness just around the corner you have painted that picture in words...regards

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Arabella Picken 03 August 2013

This poem is wonderful. I was really taken back whilst reading it. Utterly amazing

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 29 July 2013

great poem Hazel, excellently written. you take the reader with you and feel that pain the poem is about. Siya_! !

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Geetha Jayakumar 29 July 2013

Beautiful poem and pains are well expressed... Some of the old memories can definitely make one strong...Positive message is also well read.

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David Wood 29 July 2013

Love can be so cruel at times when there are three people ina relationship, that is where the iner strength is needed to overcome the pain. Another good poem.

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Dinesan Madathil 28 July 2013

Inner strength is there in everyone and there is NEED to invent it if not one is not aware of it. A fine poem that sounds positive...

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Heather Wilkins 27 July 2013

oh that picture on the wall if only they could speak nice wwrite

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Heather Wilkins 27 July 2013

lovely write. oh those picture o the wll. if only they could talk.

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Ramesh Rai 27 July 2013

tragedy in our life build strength but to express and give ink is possible by you only. but you are most powerful lady to accept all challenges of life. grt write the tragedy queen.

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Valsa George 27 July 2013

Once there is something to remind us of our inner strength at a moment when we are really low, suddenly we sense our mind getting wings and flying to new pastures and vistas of beauty! To have a deceitful husband is the greatest pain, a devoted wife can ever experience! That pain is intensely felt in this poem! I invite you to read one of my poems of more or less a similar awakening, but from a different situation entitled- The Great Escape!

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Khairul Ahsan 26 July 2013

Excellent poem with detailed description of a bleeding heart that regains strength of inner self. Deceitful spouses are hard to live with.

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Dave Walker 26 July 2013

A great poem about finding ones inner strength and self worth.

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