She wakes to a pool of light reflecting their bedroom,
Which now seems lonely and out of sight,
She turns over to his side of the bed,
Where his imprint is still warm and his lingering manly smell,
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Lovely poem indeed a pleasure to read of this sad clever write...life is full of sadness just around the corner you have painted that picture in words...regards
This poem is wonderful. I was really taken back whilst reading it. Utterly amazing
great poem Hazel, excellently written. you take the reader with you and feel that pain the poem is about. Siya_! !
Beautiful poem and pains are well expressed... Some of the old memories can definitely make one strong...Positive message is also well read.
Love can be so cruel at times when there are three people ina relationship, that is where the iner strength is needed to overcome the pain. Another good poem.
Inner strength is there in everyone and there is NEED to invent it if not one is not aware of it. A fine poem that sounds positive...
oh that picture on the wall if only they could speak nice wwrite
lovely write. oh those picture o the wll. if only they could talk.
tragedy in our life build strength but to express and give ink is possible by you only. but you are most powerful lady to accept all challenges of life. grt write the tragedy queen.
Once there is something to remind us of our inner strength at a moment when we are really low, suddenly we sense our mind getting wings and flying to new pastures and vistas of beauty! To have a deceitful husband is the greatest pain, a devoted wife can ever experience! That pain is intensely felt in this poem! I invite you to read one of my poems of more or less a similar awakening, but from a different situation entitled- The Great Escape!
Excellent poem with detailed description of a bleeding heart that regains strength of inner self. Deceitful spouses are hard to live with.
Bitter truths of a painful conjugal life impressively painted in a touching poem.