Wednesday, August 15, 2007

The Pic You Sent Comments

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Since then you’ve ground
my sincerity like
an old smoke under your heel, scoffed
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Cretan Maineiac
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Scarlett Treat 09 October 2008

Do we only see what we WANT to see?

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Ameer Mcarthur 13 September 2008

The pic gives you all the view you want.Keep em coming Cretan.

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Chris Mendros 19 August 2007

i think it can speak for all manner of victim, of all manner of abuse.

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Alison Cassidy 19 August 2007

This is a great piece Chris. Love the way you break the stanzas so the reader is forced to continue each sentence without a pause. And Ivan's right about the concept of beauty apart from the mere physical. The woman who refuses to charge her abusive partner would understand... love, Allie xxxxxxxxx

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Blue angel Florida 19 August 2007

WOW...What a nice inspiration from a Picture you can take and write about! Thanks for pooring your heart out here!

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Cece Lamberts 15 August 2007

The problem arises, Chris, when you rely on pictures to get your information about a person, and not on good old-fashioned human contact! Then, you may see beauty in those eyes on the picture, but the reality you 'live' with them maybe quite different, 'cause some people tend to show their good side on pictures...Just don't be fooled! Good job with this one, Chris. CeCe

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