Since then you’ve ground
my sincerity like
an old smoke under your heel, scoffed
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The pic gives you all the view you want.Keep em coming Cretan.
i think it can speak for all manner of victim, of all manner of abuse.
This is a great piece Chris. Love the way you break the stanzas so the reader is forced to continue each sentence without a pause. And Ivan's right about the concept of beauty apart from the mere physical. The woman who refuses to charge her abusive partner would understand... love, Allie xxxxxxxxx
WOW...What a nice inspiration from a Picture you can take and write about! Thanks for pooring your heart out here!
The problem arises, Chris, when you rely on pictures to get your information about a person, and not on good old-fashioned human contact! Then, you may see beauty in those eyes on the picture, but the reality you 'live' with them maybe quite different, 'cause some people tend to show their good side on pictures...Just don't be fooled! Good job with this one, Chris. CeCe
Do we only see what we WANT to see?