Uncompromisingly brilliant pictures
are companions caught in memory,
delicious together in harmony,
softened sepias and gentle pastels.
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Beautiful phrasing here, Scarlett - I feel this poem. Love! Esther
This little poem is packed and yet low key. Wonderful write. Raynette
Some great lines and effortless alliteration! Loved that last image of the photograph. Wonderful. -chuck
Linda~ Aside from writing, my next favorite thing is taking photos and scrap-booking! This poem is very soothing to the ear when reading it out loud. My favorite line is, 'softened sepias and gentle pastels'. I also love, 'You're just a stranger, barely remembered, a photograph curling in a forgotten drawer'. Such a bittersweet feel there. I'm looking forward to reading more of your work; o)
Oh, but the sibilants, Linda, the sibilants! ! You know exactly where my 'hotspot' is, don't you? I would have liked to see another verse or two here, but anyway. C'mon, let me submit this then vote my 9 in. With warmth, Gina.
Not a word wasted...and each one of the a treat from the delectable Ms Treat. Hugs Anna xxx