Thursday, April 19, 2007

The Photograph Comments

Rating: 5.0

Rising from the sea
Like a ball of fire
Crimson red and orange flickering in the sky
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Patricia Gale
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Ted M 29 August 2009

To quote ' Sharing this moment with you Was like a piece borrowed from heaven Adding an angel to behold it with' Vow! What wonderful words! an inspired writing taking us to an imaginary world.10

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Michael Fischer 01 May 2007

Well done Patricia! You painted a memorable picture with this...'Crimson red and orange flickering in the sky' was a great example of your imagery. Top marks! -Michael

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Theodora Onken 22 April 2007

ah, and the magic of sunrise with one you have so loved...throughout past time! A heavenly picture you paint with words! Blessings, Theo

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Leila K 19 April 2007

mmm..this poem jus takes u away...ilke u said to a different time and different place....i could jus lose myself completely...lovely poem..love LeilaXXXX

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YOU SET A MYSTICAL AMBIENCE ABOUT THIS WORK...LOVE THE FINAL 2 LINES! FJR

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Geoff Warden 19 April 2007

The masterful wordsmithing of your pen holds the true pictorial prints.... Your words flow as they sould capturing every ray of light.....well done..

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Ernestine Northover 19 April 2007

This is just lovely, I can picture it all, absolutely delightful and so moving. Well done. Loved it. Love Ernestine XXX

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