Rising from the sea
Like a ball of fire
Crimson red and orange flickering in the sky
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Well done Patricia! You painted a memorable picture with this...'Crimson red and orange flickering in the sky' was a great example of your imagery. Top marks! -Michael
ah, and the magic of sunrise with one you have so loved...throughout past time! A heavenly picture you paint with words! Blessings, Theo
mmm..this poem jus takes u away...ilke u said to a different time and different place....i could jus lose myself completely...lovely poem..love LeilaXXXX
YOU SET A MYSTICAL AMBIENCE ABOUT THIS WORK...LOVE THE FINAL 2 LINES! FJR
The masterful wordsmithing of your pen holds the true pictorial prints.... Your words flow as they sould capturing every ray of light.....well done..
This is just lovely, I can picture it all, absolutely delightful and so moving. Well done. Loved it. Love Ernestine XXX
To quote ' Sharing this moment with you Was like a piece borrowed from heaven Adding an angel to behold it with' Vow! What wonderful words! an inspired writing taking us to an imaginary world.10