Wednesday, May 21, 2008

The Photograph Comments

Rating: 5.0

The other day, I was dusting my rarely-cleaned room
Whose pathetic condition requires more than just a broom
I looked at all my memorabilia, trying to trace my life’s graph
When suddenly, I came across an old photograph
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RONY PATRA
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Dyuti Banerjee 24 March 2010

.... u needn't enlist in the race, and by the bye, ur waist still bulges! ! ! ! This poem quite pointedly puts forth an intrinsic vulnerability rooted deep within... so looking beyond that sheath of nostalgia, i quite perceive the effort to... breathe again...

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Rituparna Choudhury 21 May 2008

quite nostalgic... 'I suddenly realized.........never quit' fantastic paras...wonderful! Childhood is always memorable: -)

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A B 21 May 2008

hey too good.......'Life has given me a crash course in hard knocks Weaklings never survive, so I’ve had to pull up my socks'..........best line and very true...an individual's nature keeps on changing, he is never the same he was during his childhood........

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Marvin Brato 21 May 2008

Memoirs of the youth always reminds us how innocent and fragile we were once, but as we grow mature we learn from our mistakes! A 10.

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