‎عنقاء والقمري (The Phoenix and Turtle — by Shakespeare) Comments

2nd update on Thursday 15 February (last line of verse seven) : For Number there in love was slain, I have updated my translation as هنا، في حبهم قتلوا مفهوم العدد. instead of the previous هنا، قتل عدد في حبهم.. Is it better?

Update on Thursday 15 February: For Love and constancy is dead, I have updated my translation as لقد مات الحب وإخلاص. instead of the previous توفي الحب وكونستانس.. Is it better? — Well, I tend to believe it IS better. ;)

2nd update on Thursday 1 February: For Save the eagle, feathered king, I have updated my translation as ‎باستثناء النسر مع ريش الملكي instead of the previous باستثناء النسر، الملك الريش: . Is it better?

Update on Thursday 1 February: For But thou shrieking harbinger, I have updated my translation as ‎ولكن بالنسبة لك، رسولمع بصوت صراخ instead of the previous ولكن لك، رسول صارخ. Is it better?