The Phoenix Comments

A beautiful and touching inscription has been made on phoenix. The concluding lines are much impressive. It may be cited here.... His smiling progeny picking fruits from his orchard And his cattle chewing cud in the shade of trees. Why scoff it as the fancy of a fevered mind? Oh! But to dream is every man's right. A brilliant poem amazingly shared.10

Destruction and exclusion usually stays in the shadows of life but we all still have our dreams when the sun shines on our strength of character and our unique individuality! I love this outstanding write!

Let the dream of rising again as a phoenix come true, we need such dreams to die in peace..............10

out of ashes rises the phoenix again and again. nice take on it

when the eviction notice is issued, it is very hard for human to manage their life again, if the governments do not help them. Other than the fact, the dreams are elaborated with a proper title!

A great 'take' on the rise of the Phoenix - well penned Valsa.

We rightly assume that the intuition to go for a survival against any odd is man`s great trait. But very often he gives in to the strange reverses at the end. A finer society which can never evict any different inhabitant from this world of larger dimension has to be our ultimate dream. I wish this phoenix all the very best to make a difference. Another piece from Ms Valsa`s Samaritan ideology! A fine feast of poetic exuberance.

A creditable poem, well portraying the man in a fix. The way he rises again of course in his dream is sure like the bird Phoenix rising. Thanks and best wishes. Chandra Thiagarajan

Aha a spectacular narrative in a fine rhyme scheme. Gud if he cud readjust to advanced living.