Thursday, September 26, 2013

The Phoenix Comments

Rating: 4.5

A mythical bird
spirit of fire
filled with
intense desire
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Heather Burns
COMMENTS
Khairul Ahsan 15 October 2013

A beautiful poem. 'Life cycle a thousand years drenched in a thousand tears' Nice!

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Patricia Grantham 03 October 2013

A nice poem of this mythical bird. The Phoenix is depicted and portrayed in many a book. Its legendary life is recycled many times. Lovely.

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Sallam Yassin 01 October 2013

Yes we can reclaim the Life again and we can go ahead with gain / bright

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Dee Corpolongo 01 October 2013

Oh I loved this beautiful poem! ! ! So magical and imaginable, filled with flames of new born strength. Beautiful! ! ! !

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William F Dougherty 28 September 2013

The archetypes of mythology are invariably useful analogies for poem-making.

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Danny Draper 27 September 2013

Nice rhyme and meter with succinct styling and well told story.

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