Tuesday, August 4, 2009

The Phoenix Comments

Rating: 5.0

Life seems so easy through the eyes of a child
For joy seems so great and pain seems so mild
But when the years unfold the world seems so wild
This is when you know what it means to cry
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Matthew Densley
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Wayne Bowen 24 December 2009

A meaning full poem well versed and thought out.

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Jean Dament 25 September 2009

I enjoyed the comparison with that of the Phonex rising with yourself in this well written poem. It had great imagery & flow to it too. Thanks for this one; as it is a joy to read. Ravensong

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Matthew Densley

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