You were hailed
As the Pearl of the Orient Seas
A precious gem
That never ceases to amaze.
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A beautifully written poem on your motherland, Rose Marie. Behold my Motherland, The Philippines! She will come to your side To embrace and commend Your righteousness Takes her whip to penalize Expunge your wickedness And to overthrow all forms Of ignorance, corruption And oppression. Your pride on your motherland reaches its pinnacle in these lines. Nice work 10+
It’s amazing how both of us, similarly express our thoughts and feelings about the constant sorrow of our beloved countries.
I am so happy that one of my poems- My Fractured Identity' is prescribed in the syllabus of the undergraduate students in your country in an English book entitled Voyager! Reading this lovely poem, one can feel the pride you feel for your country! A Beautiful patriotic write! A full 10 (2)
This Asian country with a unique blend of the orient and the occident in culture and customs is fast emerging as a powerful country! Comprising a number of islands, it stays as a pearl studded necklace in the Pacific! I understand that the people here are in general educated, God fearing and mild! (1)
A cradle of warmth and beauty The calm water that soothes the body The gentle wind that caresses the face The flower bud that blooms ahead of the others The bird that sings unceasingly And The teardrop that falls in the sea To become the biggest Pearl Of All.........touching expression with nice theme. Really it is a beautiful that attracts to read over and over again. Thanks again for sharing.
Such a beautiful poem should be poem of the day everyday for a week.
Rose Marie, you need to try and link this poem to Pomehunter's request for poems about ones country. Such a magnificient offering should not be hidden.
Thank you, Robert for your kindness and thoughtfulness. A million thanks. I just did upon seeing this message. I hope I did the right thing.
Has any poetess or poet written such a beautiful poem about the Phillipines? ++++10 Robert
Thank you, Robert for your wonderful comment. You gave me inspiration.
Great poem about your motherland the Philippines beautifully written...10+++
Bountiful and beautiful! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Thanks Edward for commenting. Your visit is much appreciated.
This gracious piece is a nice tribute to your motherland! You should feel proud of penning such a glorious poem! Great! It’s my pleasure reading it time and again!
Thank you, Dr. Dillip. Your great comment meant a lot to me specially on this poem, a tribute to my motherland.
This specific poem might be providing a great satisfaction to you as pen blazes in describing the elegance of a lovely queen no other than your own country! I love your expression Rose: A cradle of warmth and beauty/The calm water that soothes the body/The gentle wind that caresses the face/The flower bud that blooms ahead of the others/The bird that sings unceasingly...(cont..)
You are right Dr. Dillip. That's what I really felt when I penned this tribute. Thank you for the beautiful insight.
You overlap a tear with a pearl here, reminding me of the painful history your people endured with an indomitable spirit.
A wonderful comment, Denis. Thank you for your visit and time.
Thank you, Ric for your great comment. Your visit is much appreciated.
Wow The Philippines the biggest Pearl Of All ......well done, and be proud
Such a great comment, Feipeng. Much appreciated. Thank you for the visit.
Remarkable piece....